Heather Tullis’ A Perfect Fit (2014) is book one of her seven-book DiCarlo Brides series. Based on a good idea, the story ultimately falls flat due to immature writing.
The concept: At the reading of their billionaire father’s will, two sisters born out of their father’s marriage find out that four half-sisters exist. In addition, in order for them all to earn their inheritance, all six of them have to live together while they launch their late father’s new resort. Through that journey, they also eventually meet each of the men their father had identified as their ideal match. To add another layer of complication, sinister figures attempt to destroy the empire the sisters are working to maintain.
A Perfect Fit is Cami’s story. She is the eldest daughter, the product of her parents’ marriage who supposedly struggles the most coping with her father’s duplicity.
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